Monday, November 27, 2006

Villanelle; The Dead

The Dead

The dead shall rise again. The dead shall rise.
Out of the sea they come, covered in flesh.
They are astounded at their newborn eyes.

Will these bones live? Nothing can sanitize
The worm within the shroud around the dress.
The dead shall rise again. The dead shall rise

Not wiser for their absence, mouthing lies
They lived and breathed, lying as they confess.
They are astounded at their newborn eyes.

Christ said, “Come as a child.” No disguise
Can save them from the dreaded second death.
The dead shall rise again. The dead shall rise.

They must submit. There is no compromise.
It’s them or God, and they are in excess.
They are astounded at their newborn eyes.

The sun sets on the dead. By moonrise
Most are dead again in God’s winepress.
The dead shall rise again. The dead shall rise
And be astounded at their newborn eyes.


I continue to be dull in my mind but my emotions are marginally better. Unlike my normal self, I have little to say. I trust it's the medication that's doing this, flattening my affect, taking some of the noise inside my head away. One good sign is a return of sexual interest, something I have sorely lacked these last eight months. But I have been fooled before, thinking I was on the road to recovery, so I won't invest too much time in considering if I am better. At least I am no worse.

I will continue to labor at poetic forms. Thanks for all the feedback. I am not currently rating my mood because the microscopic attention I pay it may be bad for my mental health.


Thine,

CE

2 comments:

  1. Dear CE,

    I, for one, am glad you are feeling better.

    Perhaps you could persuade your husbands, John and Suzanne, to post a daily graph of your vital signs, along with their other tasks of rete pegging those subcutaneous layers upon layers to the bone. Then we can watch as the agonal green flat-lines. Readers can then console themselves with the fact that they still have your wonderful singing voice to swoon over. I could fall in love with that Irish/Oz voice. I’m terrible at placing accents; people invariably sing with accents divergent from their natural speech. I blame the rappers for this.

    Sickily,
    but counting down
    to reparation,

    Coral

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  2. Likewise I trust the wild boars of your secret skeleton may be herded into docility by the proper toxins. The thought of having two husbands certainly casts a Janus charm upon me, yet I must suffer on with just one wife.

    Galumphatronic,

    CE

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